Below are my Profile and Talk of the Town essays which are revised.   I shortened the Profile essay and changed a few grammatical errors.  I kept my sentences short so structuring wasn't an issue.  With my talk of the town essay, I focused more on criticizing the State Police Department and added a few snarks of my own to make it more of my writing instead of just another news piece.  I chose the two blog posts because they were interesting reads for me and they could be found by going on the website listed below.  So far this semester I have done two different styles of writing.  I am excited about the next two papers because I will get to write them in a way that is normal for me and in my comfort zone.   

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